Friday

Flash Fiction Friday - The Siren



She leaned in to him and her breath hissed, hot in his ear. “Come walk with me.”  He followed her, this siren. He had watched her all night, everyone had.  He would have followed her anywhere.  He did not even know her name.

The early light wrapped around her in a golden haze.  As she danced along the track, her skirt flicked up, teasing, bouncing against the top of her thighs.  She looked back at him over her shoulder and laughed, pinching at her hem, tugging it out to the side, making sure he could see her arse.  She skipped away and then back she flitted towards him.  “Do you want to taste me?”  Without waiting for a response she knelt over him, allowing his tongue to probe her depths.  She gasped, her back arched, nectar dripping down his face.

“I told you, the fear makes it fun.  Can you feel the hum?  That is the train coming.  Don’t look so concerned.  I am sure I will have time to untie you...”  He heard the siren, heard her giggle.  He heard the siren and he could not turn away - he was locked between her thighs.

My very first flash fiction Friday peeps!  Thanks to Insatiabear! 150-200 words, phrase "in a golden haze"

Hopefully by next week I will figure out how to install the button...

xxx JaT

14 comments:

bumtickler said...

Wow, left me breathless. thank you

Dioneo said...

Wow, JaT, that was a beautiful piece. The Siren is one of my favorite literary themes and you capture it so well. Welcome to FFF!

I'm so glad I found your blog: "food and fucking"--I'm going to like it here! :)

slowburn said...

That was very good! And dangerous! I liked the detail.

The Panserbjørne said...

Wow, what a first entry. I'm glad you joined us this week!

Interesting how some people interpret this as the light of dawn, while others see it as the light of sunset. I think I agree with you that it seems like early light.

Anyhow, very sexy and arresting FFF. Definitely an element of danger there, although I have to wonder if an imp like this would bother to untie him when she was done. Seems too flighty for that. :)

Welcome to the fun!

-- PB

rozewolf said...

Oh what a lovely twist!!! Did she get him off... the tracks that is... in time? LOL... Very enjoyable

Naughty Lexi said...

Oooh, I liked this one a lot. Don't know that I'd like to be in his shoes, but the impishness of "The fear makes it fun." I could hear her saying that. Very sexy, very nice take. Welcome to our little band of misfits :)

Spring Flower said...

Dangerous and incredibly arousing... loved that. Welcome!! :)

Drenchxoxo said...

Utterly fantastic. Nice work. Welcome to FFF! Can't wait to read more from you.

Advizor54 said...

Ahhh, called to the rocks of death by a beautiful siren song, "Do you want to taste me?" The ruin of many a poor boy...

Welcome to the work Sister. A wonderful first entry, and isn't that first entry the best?

Just a Taste said...

Hi all new readers! I am glad you enjoyed...sticking to the word limit is HARD!

Oh and I am not convinced she would get him off the tracks either....I envisaged her standing to the side and watching the train come, him thinking he was about to be hit and the train whooshing past on the next track over...her laughing...laughing...laughing...and pouting and getting angry at him being too scared to cum after that...perhaps depositing him still tied up and naked back to the party....

sigh....yeah....

nilla said...

Wow that was *awesome*! When i realize HE was tied ...

a surge of electricity ran through me!

Bravo!

nilla

aisha said...

Oh, that was awesome. Loved it!!! Particularly the twist at the end, of course.

aisha

Mick and Molly said...

Ummm.... I'd like what that guy ordered. Mick.

Liley Brown said...

MMM, Beautiful...:D