Friday

Flash Fiction - The Force



Her back screamed in response to being forced up against the brickwork.  With each thrust new gouges opened themselves on her shoulders.  Her legs wrapped around him, she clawed at his chest.  Tiny speckles of blood accented the long red lines she drew with her nails.  He let out a loud growl and came inside her.  She shuddered her response. 

How deliciously ironic that he cold bite of steel should link them for an act of such debauchery. 

He winked at her, “We could have used these earlier…”

She giggled as the police officer pushed them towards the waiting van.


Second Flash Fiction...still haven't figured out how to install the button...100 words though, yay me!

Thank you Panserbjørne at Insatiabear!!

5 comments:

Not My Original Vows said...

Smokin' hot!
Katia

The Panserbjørne said...

If you really want to use the link button that badly, you can find the code for it on the FFF FAQ page, http://insatiabear.blogspot.com/2010/03/flash-fiction-friday-faq.html . A little ways down there's the HTML code in a box. Just make sure you're in HTML editing mode when posting and copy/paste that code to your entry, and you'll be all set! Don't freak out if you can't get it to work, though; it's not required by any means. :)

Thanks for joining us this week. Do please make sure that when you notify me, you provide your page's address, because when you did this week, your site wasn't listed in your profile. I had to go back and check a FFF from a few weeks previous to get it.

Thanks!

-- PB

Soren said...

Love your opening, very erotic, very raunchy ;)

~Soren

Advizor54 said...

i like the idea that they were still going at it as the cops rounded them up, or maybe it was the cops themselves forcing their actions. I wonder what came right before these 100 words.

Nice work, sexy and thought provoking.

nilla said...

Oh gosh this was simply delightful! the thing that struck the most was the delicious lightness of the mood of the piece.

congrats on a lovely piece of flash fiction!

nilla/snow